BopItz CCA app

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[OOC Section]

Steam Name: BopItz

Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:66379308

How long have you been playing on the server?: About a week now

Do you have any experience within the CCA? If so, what was the highest rank you've ever achieved?: Well, out of all the HL2RP servers I've been on, the highest rank I've made it to was OfC, in the HELIX division, which seems to always be the division I go for on a server,

Do you undertsand that abuse and/or failure to roleplay correctly will lead to an immediate de-whitelist?: I do.

Give at least ten detailed lines of RP as a unit that demonstrates you understand P2L. (Scenario of your choice.): 
-A unit fighting a rebel in D0-

**Unit 366 quickly runs up to the door, the location was District 0, and he had been told by a lone man that he had found a gun, and to come quickly.  366 followed him, not knowing what was in store, what had come.**
**The man fired two rounds into the wall, the paper-thin walls quickly falling apart as the bullets slammed through them, barely missing 366.**
**Unit 366 sighed, before taking a deep breath, he never got to say goodbye to Unit 456(random), the one he had grown quite fond with her.  He exhaled, unsnapping his UPS from his holster, then going into a pouch on his right side and loading one round, it was cold, dead to the touch.**
**The man fired another round, this one slamming through the crisp paper-thin wall and landing in 366's left arm, making him let out a short wine, which was scrambled by his Vo-Coder.**
**The bullet hit 366 quickly, going through his left arm, becoming logded there.**
**The man looked down at his now-empty magazine, he didn't have any more bullets, since he was a Anti-Citizen, along with being poor.**
**366 raised his gun, then stomping into the door-frame, unloading three cold rounds into the man.**
**One bullet landed in the man's chest, peircing his left-lung, as the man quickly fell over, expelling air.**
**The other bullets slammed into the wall behind the man, leaving bullet holes in the now blood-covered wall.**
**The man fell to the ground, gripping his chest, blood ozzing from his chest, as he attempted to get a decent breath in, then, without hesitation, another bullet flew into the room, entering the man's head, killing him.**
**366 quickly turned around, looking at a man who was cloaked, he had a combine sniper, and the cloaked figure quickly got up and ran.**
**366 sighed as he holstered his pistol, then reaching for his radio and clicking the dispatch button.**
** "Unit 366 requiring cleanup, 10-20 is district 3.  Anti-Citizen amputated." Then 366 lowered his hand off the radio, looking on the rooftop, someone had been hired to kill him, what had he done though?..**
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[IC Section]

Character Name: Chris Nelson

Character Age: Around 25

Character Gender: Male

Character CID: (Char not yet made)

Write at least two paragraphs explaining the backstory of your character that wishes to join the CCA.:
Chris grew up in America, East America to be specific.  He had a nice life before the war came along, lived in a loft with his parents until he was old enough to move out, in which he moved into his own apartment.  Two years before the war, Chris was approached by a man wearing Army Fratigues, who asked if he would die for his country, no knowing, he agreed, and sealed his fate.  Chris was a very athletic man, finishing his PT above the others, along with being able to endure much more, gaining him the rank of Corporal before his training was over.  He was then shipped off to Iraq, to fight a new terrorist threat.  While in Iraq, he gained a riflemen squad, and led them around becoming very fond of them.  Until that day, he remembers his clearly.  His squad was patroling a area where a terrorist threat had been reported, and his squad, along with him were assigned to the job.  Until that happened, the sky turned back..  Everything dimmed out, making it to where he couldn't see, he told his squad to retreat, and they went back to their town, very close to their base, as they saw Blackhawks flying off in the distance they were coming from.  Then it happened, the ground shook, and everything went dark.

Chris had survived the invasion due to him and his squad hiding.  They ditched their uniforms and dressed up like the locals, seeing how these.. Things..  had mortar striked their base, just as they were about to drive there.  Chris then made the decision to fall back into the populous, since they were dressed up like locals, they ditched their weapons and equipment, then blending in.  Chris and his squad were quickly seperated, each being sent to another city, almost like the combine knew who they were.  Chris had been chosen to be sent to City 14, then City 45, his time in City 14 was brief, as it was quickly removed due to the rising rebel threat.  Chris grew up, later looking up to the combine, he respected their power, capturing the world in 7 hours, what a thing, and, he was starting to become hungry, and he had no money to pay for food, so he joined up, going into the force for a better life, and well..  A better world..  One he would fight for..

(Yes, I know most people hate the common "Military NCO, or Ex-Military backstory, but it does add character, and traits, so I'll let it be for now.)

UPDATE 1 - Redid second paragraph of backstory
I like the roleplay, and the backstory is pretty neat too. I'll offer you my support towards acceptance.
You clearly know what you're doing and it is difficult to find any major issues with this application. +Support
You have displayed good RP examples and given a solid backstory.
+SUPPORT
This is accepted.
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