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[OOC Section]

Steam Name: Komrade Seals

Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:45272469

How long have you been playing on the server?: About 1-1/2 hours.

Do you have any experience within the CCA? If so, what was the highest rank you've ever achieved?: Yes- The highest rank I've ever gotten is Commander, the server's rank below sectorial.

Do you undertsand that abuse and/or failure to roleplay correctly will lead to an immediate de-whitelist?: Yes, I understand this.

Give at least ten detailed lines of RP as a unit that demonstrates you understand P2L. (Scenario of your choice.):
**MPF Unit 1 walks out of the Nexus, stun baton in hand, he walks up to the other unit on guard duty at the Nexus-front checkpoint.
**MPF Unit 1 looks at MPF Unit 2, saying "<:: 2, let's form a PT. ::>" he says in his vo-coded voice, beginning to move away from the front-nexus checkpoint, expecting MPF unit 2 to follow.
**MPF Unit 2 begins to follow, stating "<:: Copy that, who's the designated PT lead? ::>" he states, waiting for a response from Unit 1 as they begin to take a right towards the RDC.
**MPF Unit 1 says "<:: Me. ::>" as he puts his finger to his ear, stating "<:: Be advised, commencing 10-50 around 10-20 Ration Distribution Center, units involved in PT Unit 1 - me - and Unit 2, over. ::>" 
**MPF Unit 1 notices a citizen running and jumping, moving up to investigate, he shouts to the citizen, "<:: Hold it, get on the wall! ::>", as he moves forward towards them, readying his stun stick.
**Citizen compliantly gets on the wall, spreading his arms and legs immediately.
**MPF Unit 1 turns to unit 2, "<:: Keep an eye out while I take care of 'im. ::>" he states as he moves towards the citizen, attempting to tie them with a zip-tie from his utility belt.
**Citizen does not resist, getting tied.
**MPF Unit 1 then pats down the citizen quickly, making sure there is no contraband. (**There is not.), he then looks at the back of the head of the citizen, stating in his vo-coded voice, "<:: Apply. ::>"
**Citizen states his CID and Name compliantly, remaining on the wall.
**MPF Unit 1 reaches for his datapad, holding it up to his face, typing in his datapad the information of the citizen, putting his hand to his ear, saying "<:: Giving 10-91 citation for movement violation, over. ::>"
**MPF Unit 1 reaches for his utility belt, pulling out a utility knife, cutting the citizen's ties, stating "<:: Move along! ::>
**MPF Unit 1 turns to Unit 2, stating "<:: Let's continue 10-50. ::>" he states.
**MPF Unit 2 nods, standing behin Unit 1, waiting for him to contine the patrol.
**MPF Unit 1 begins to walk, placing his finger to his ear, stating, "<:: Be advised, resuming 10-50 with Unit 2. ::>"
**The MPF units continue to patrol, noticing no 647E activity.
**MPF Unit 1 states on the radio, "<:: Sociostatus: Green, no 647E spotted. Turning corner back to nexus to conclude 10-50 with me and Unit 2, be advised. ::>"
**MPF Unit 2 reaches for his radio, hearing some things, "<:: 1, request device called, 10-20, Grotto, 11-6. ::>"
**MPF Unit 1 nods, saying on the radio "<:: Responding! ::>"
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OOC note: Jack Davies does not OOCly exist, a stand-in for the IC part of the application
[IC Section]

Character Name: Jack Davies

Character Age: 36

Character Gender: Male

Character CID: 60634

Write at least two paragraphs explaining the backstory of your character that wishes to join the CCA.:
Jack Davies was born into the Davies family in the year 1986. His parents, David and Samantha Davies were both working at a family owned grocery store in the rural area of Cairns. As a toddler, he adored fire trucks and police men, like a lot of toddlers. His parents couldn't afford him lots of nice toys and outfits so he stuck with the little wooden fire truck his grandma gave him when he was three. When Jack was five years old, his sister, Emma, was born. Once Jack was 6, his mom started home schooling him until he was old enough to walk to the school house 2 miles away.

On Jack's 9th birthday, on October 26th, he stopped getting home schooled by his mom, and began to attend the school house. Every morning, he had to wake up at 6 o'clock to eat a hearty breakfast, and begin his trek to school. It was rough at his school. The class had only 16 people in it, and the teacher was not the best. She would fail to teach the correct lesson, then all of the students would fail. This went on for the next three years until he moved up to a difference teacher.He passed on an above-average level until he decided at the end of high school, in 2004, to move to Sydney. His parent and sister were proud, but they would miss him.

It took a few months, the long drive, and all of the paperwork he had to fill out while working at a convenience store for some side cash. Once he got settled in his new apartment, he applied for the local fire department, he still had the little wooden fire truck. After waiting for about a week, he finally was accepted in. He went to the academy for the department. It was hard work for Jack, as he was not the most fit person in the world. Going through the academy, he met George. George and him both would be working in the same department, so they got to know each other. George had been from upstate suburbia area of Sydney.
After a few week of training, they moved back out to the department. He had loved it there, his Chief was a nice, but hard working man. He mostly got called out for some simple, and sometime erratic things. He once got called out because a man got stuck in a trash can, and could not get out. His first actual fire was when he was 20, a local apartment building had caught fire due to a arsonist. He got to ride on the back of the truck going to the fire. Once his squad had arrived, he was tasked with going into the building, and attempting to find and rescue anyone still alive. He had practiced this almost every day while waiting for another ridiculous call, but it still took him a minute to put everything on. George, a fellow fire-fighter named Lucy, and himself were all together when they were inside. The building was old, maybe eighty years old, and the fire had destroyed the remaining structural strength the building still possessed. Their chief has just told them to evacuate when it collapsed. Jack saw a stray piece of wood fly into Lucy's face. He had topped over her corpse. A large open cabinet fell from above, it had opened and landed right above Jack like a coffin. He has been extremely lucky it had opened. and he was able to fit. After about three hours of silence and darkness, Jack had finally been able to punch his way out of the top of the cabinet. He crawled around in the collapsed building, until he finally found an open passage. Everyone thought he had perished along with George and Lucy. His Chief granted him a week of paid leave to compensate for what had happened. After that week, he returned to the department for another 4 years until the Portal Storms.

It all had kicked off when Jack was out shopping at the mall down the street. He heard a mass amount of screaming when the portals first dropped the creatures from Xen. He had then dropped what he was doing and rushed outside to see the Police issuing everyone back inside. Jack then sprinted back to his apartment building. Inside, every television was tuned to the news, reporting on the event. After about an hour, he saw some National Guard soldiers moving down his block. About 30 minutes after he saw the troops, he heard a large amount of gun fire, screaming of wounded humans, and aliens alike. In the next few days, he heard that the military had secured the perimeter of the city. In about a weeks time, he heard a lot more gunfire, and a lot more screaming. He looked outside to see weird floating helicopter-like beings raining gunfire onto the troops and civilians. He had quickly closed his blinds and rushed to his bathroom, locking his door. Within minutes, he had three legged alien like kangaroo looking things bust down his door, and take him outside. After weeks of being held by the alien like beings, he was shipped to the industrial part of the new City 17. He had never made contact with his family after the Portal Storms, but he had liked the new cites. Within days, a Metro Police Force had made its appearance. They ignored his attempts to make contact with his family, so he grew angry and resentful, but never broke a rule. It was all twisting and churning in his mind and body. Until one day he saw that the CWU were accepting applications. He decided that he needed an extra pay, so he applied. Not thinking he would be accepted, he was. He then learned the real greatness to the Universal Union, and the Combine. Over time, he learned to admire the MPF units and realised that they were much similar to the police men he idolised so much as a child, and decided to join.
+support
Nice and detailed backstory, people that put the effort in to write a good backstory are obviously capable of RP. P2L Scenario shows your understanding on the gamemode but could do with being a bit more interesting since it doesn't really show an intense level of P2L (e.g lengthy /mes) which it doesn't have to ofc, I'm just trying to find some criticism for you and the fact that i'm struggling shows that its a good application.
What Monkey said. (Thanks homie.)
+SUPPORT
I've rped with you in game, and you provided one of the best fights I've had in RP. Out of the 6 or so total people there, absolutely no one complained about anything, including yourself. You were detailed and fair in play to lose. Just try not to be too rough as CCA, Aye friend? Besides that, I give a +Support
Cheers for the feedback, guys!
Yeah, uh... what MadMonkey said. +support
This is accepted.
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