[OOC Section] Steam Name: Sharkguy37 Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:66958054 How long have you been playing on the server?: About 5 hrs but way more by the time you're reading this. Do you have any experience within the CCA? If so, what was the highest rank you've ever achieved?: The highest rank would be 02 And in case your wonder the server is shut down it was on Combine control and was called Particularly Me and Was taken down due to Trojan but besides that here's my experience. As an 02 I took down many malignants and even a few Anti citizens. But one of the biggest things I did was with some other units Take down a rebel outpost in the canals! it was intense because if we failed we would not get another shot. And we killed most of em some just disconnected to avoid it others simply ran but we did it at least. Do you understand that abuse and/or failure to roleplay correctly will lead to an immediate de-whitelist?: Yes, and it has happened to before and I swear to not do it again. Give at least ten detailed lines of RP as a unit that demonstrates you understand P2L. (Scenario of your choice.): *77534 would rush for his as fast as light before he is shot by the anti citizen. (rolls 99/100 and shoots the anti citizen point blank) *Swings a punch at the prisoner and he gets knocked out. *bashes the man in the head with the stun baton but he didint get knocked out. *77534 Shot his gun at the target but missed the first shot and only hit his finger on the other shot. *gets ready to grab his gun and to shoot before he does but fails and gets shot in the head killing 77534. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [IC Section] Character Name:  Felix Cliff Character Age: 23 Character Gender: Male Character CID: Seven-Seven-Five-Three-Four (77534) Write at least two paragraphs explaining the backstory of your character that wishes to join the CCA.: Felix is a simple ordinary human being that has traveled far from hundreds of city's and currently is in city 45. Felix is a loyalist who simply can't sleep without the doubt that an anti -citizen or some criminal is next door and by joining the CCA he can feel safe knowing that he or his fellow CPO's can defend him from such danger. So that's why Felix Cliff wants to join the CCA so he can come home feeling safe and protect other people from harm and keep this wonderful city from harms way, And finally so that he could help put an end to the high profile crime so that all citizen may also like me sleep at night knowing they're safe.

There are six lines of roleplay, none of which demonstrate a great understanding of P2L or roleplaying as CCA. I would suggest rewriting your roleplay examples. There are also a number of spelling and grammar issues within your application, so I would suggest reading back over it a few times and editing out any language issues. Finally, your two paragraphs are short and don't provide many details about your character's backstory. It is always better to have a great grasp of your character's history and personality, so that you can immerse yourself in that character to a greater extent. You already have some central themes which you should be able to build a character out of. I wish you good luck, but I [b]can't support[/b] this application in it's current state. I am willing to change this if you are able to update your application to a much higher quality. EDIT: I have noticed improvement in both the roleplay line areas and grammar. I am very pleased you want to improve your application. I would suggest giving your description an inflation, though, and learning from other sources what Play to Lose means. [color=#2980b9][b]Neutral[/b][/color].

[size=200][color=#c0392b]-Support[/color][/size] [color=#ecf0f1][size=100]There isn't any evidence that you actually read the questions since neither your backstory nor your P2L Scenario reach the minimum requirements, until those are fixed I can't support this.[/size][/color]  

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