[OOC Section] Steam Name: Siper Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:59497199 How long have you been playing on the server?: For a while now don't know the exacty time but I remeber when everyone got a huge Do you have any experience roleplaying as an Enslaved/Free Vortigaunt?: Enslaved Vortigaunt, is the one I have the most. What do you know about the Vortessence?: Pretty much a lot, It can be used to power things and  be used as a weapon the vortessence I consider an ability unique to vortigaunts. The ability to become powerful enough to hold back an unknown entity that is able to put people into stasis, they're able to go though to another entitles dimension and pull out the people he is holding. If vortigaunts meditate long enough they are able to transcend to the next stage, which allows them to learn new abilities. The vortessence is really powerful and if the vortigaunt is strong They use  Funny story on another server I died and was brought back to life many times, due to heart failure and a vortigaunt was there to jump it back up. I know a lot about what the Vortessence can do but my theory of what connects all the vortigaunts is that giant crystal in the final boss' in half life is teleported into every brain into the vortigaunt and that's how they're able to communicate via telepathy. But the only thing arguing against my evidence that the vortessence lets the vortigaunts communicate is where the hunter stabs Aylx and they start screaming at each other across the whatever they go though. The vortessence has a lot of power but is limited to what some things vortigaunts can do, vortigaunts can bring back critically injured people to life questionably. The vortessence is a tool that vortigaunts use not as a weapon they use it so it helps them complete their task not to fight, They will use it to hunt though as shown in episode two when they hunt for advisors. Give at least ten detailed lines of RP as either a Free or Enslaved Vortigaunt. (Scenario of your choice.): C45:CCA-Porkchop:i3.19028 says: <::Biotic you are being assigned cleaning duty you are to sweep and mop the streets.:>> **Dar'jee looks at the officer and noding his head in agreement saying "Very well." **C45:CCA-Porkchop:i3.19028 Opens the door letting the vortigaunt out while making sure the other one's don't attempt to escape and closes the door quickly and locks it. **Dar'jee looks at his fellow vortigaunts and turns away and looks at the officer following him to where ever he is going to go. **C45:CCA-Porkchop:i3.19028 goes to the closet and grabs a broom and dustpan handing it to the biotic, then turns away walking down the hall beckoning the vortigaunt to follow. **Dar'jee accepts the broom and dustpan holding it and follows the officer down the hall while holding the dustpan in his left hand and the broom in his right. **C45:CCA-Porkchop:i3.19028 says: <:: Alright once we're outside you're going to sweep the UCH and clean the tables and desks you are not to speak to anyone am I understood? Dar'jee says: "We understand your demands." C45:CCA-Porkchop:i3.19028 says: <:: Good, if you fail to comply with any of our orders you will be beaten and if you try to escape you will die.::> Dar'jee says: "your terms are acceptable, we will do what you requested." Our little character friends now arriving at the UCH C45:CCA-Porkchop:i3.19028 says: <::Get to work you brown skin dirty piece of shit.:>> **Dar'jee Begins to start sweeping all the dust and crumbs and specs and sweeping them into a pile (All around the room) **Dar'jee sweeps the dirty pile into the dustpan and begins sweeping all of the UCH. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [IC Section] Character Name: Dar'Jee Enslaved/Free?: Enslaved then work towards free. Write at least two paragraphs explaining the backstory of your Vortigaunt as to why they're either Enslaved or Free:            Dar'jee was the same with all the other vortigaunts captured and forced to work and clean. He was really young about 100 years old. He would always do as he told when resorted to cleaning and other jobs he was given. He would never argue against them because he knew he was in no power to negotiate. He would always clean and do as he was told and when he return to the biotic holding cell he would communicate with the other vortigaunts if he had an issue, felt stressed or just wanted to talk. Vortigaunts in the cell would never commit hostile action towards one another sometimes a vortigaunt escapes now and then but time will tell for others. Discovering that patience is the key and it could possibly prevent disaster for him or his comrades.                 He would always try to stay on the good side of people apologizing if he's done something wrong always attempting to avoid conflict he wouldn't do things that are considered "Bad" while in the view of the combine. He would always help others if they needed help in a dire situation life or death but if it was petty such as over a bar seat he would interfere. If a fellow vorti were to get beaten up he would help him anyway possible to help him recover from his wounds.He would never argue with someone even if he knew they were wrong but if they said something out of the ordinary or plain dumb he would question them and their intelligence. In opinions he wouldn't care for others opinion based on him if they like him he will be optimistic and try to help the person. But if they dislike him he will show his displeasure and attempt to avoid contact with them. It hurts him when he sees other vortigaunts get beaten or killed in front of him if anyone gets harmed in his presence it damages him. He views all life is worthy of a chance waste that chance then you have no more chances you've used them all up.               Dar'Jee believes in cosmic retribution if someone does something unforgivable then he would look at them with displeasure, if someone kills a bunch of people he would attack them killing him/her but if they try to be a good person then he would forgive them. He would view people on their past actions but view it as their experience if they were to do it now he would find their actions unacceptable. He doesn't take aggresive charge towards a person even if they were to attack another one of his own he would attempt to negotiate if they didn't listen then he would resort to attack. While growing up he notices that you can't trust anyone  or atleast everyone, he would talk to other vortigaunts if necessary. Anti-social most of the time he would be ( yoda grammer I have.) He would only talk if it was the last thing to resort to. Don't strike until he/she/it strikes first, is what he learned because to make assumtions isn't the best way to go.

+Neutral Backstory needs more work on but everything else is pretty good :)

I am very stale on the lore for vortigaunts different server have different time line so I just made him young for some reason and I was writting around 2-4 in the morning. I'll review and fix if I got the timeline it would help A LOT in this because I need to know what the timeline is and it would help with the assistance with my backstory.

Your rp example appears to be fine enough, but your understanding of vortigaunts is lacking. There's a notable lack of seriousness and a stale attitude in your Backstory as well, which I do not like. -support from me due to this.

I'm not sure you understand, you complain about my stale attitude but that has nothing to do anything with the application. Backstory is understandable I was up all night, and please also explain lack of seriousness. I want you to understand the Officer porkchop isn't a real units name I don't want to use the time to put something there on every community i've applied for I have used officer porkchop as a name. I don't think you seem to understand that name of who i'm roleplaying with doesn't matter, I could be talking to a guy name Tyrone under a mask and still I bet you the chat will be the same. I'm not sure if you're just attempting to -rep because i'm a general ass hole but you have to understand you're on the internet i'm honest and I don't care about negative or positive views. Someone could hate me and I treat them back with if not double hate. Someone likes me they're pretty cool good I made a new friend I want you to tell me what is the problem grammer mistakes horrible OOC experience with me? I want you to state the problem and yes I wrote a paragraph to respond to you because i'm not sure if this is making me mad or confused mostly confused because I do not seem to understand what the issue is. If it's just because I named officer porkchop i'll give you a bouquet forget-me-nots if this will fix our possible hostile relationship, this will be the first time I give someone flowers.

I've spoken to a few staff members over this, and I decided that this needs to be seen. In the server, I recieved this set of PMs. [PM] Sophia Johnson: what the hell? Just because I put officer porkchop, or is it because of my stale timeline of something I don't retain knowledge on? [PM] Sophia Johnson: and is it because I said this? . ( In vort years fgt.)  or was it If any of you fucking shits fuck up again this is what is going to happen to you. Because thats fucking roleplay the combine are brutal fucks and don't give two shits high ranking officers most certinaly don't give a shit about a enslaved vortigaunt, let alone a random stranger on the street. [PM] Sophia Johnson: If there is a problem then you can post it on the app and i'll see what else you have to say. Don't input your opinion because of my Attitude [PM] Sophia Johnson: because if insults is something you can't handle then you shouldn't even be anywhere near the internet let alone society. This is rather childish behavior, considering all I said to her was 'I don't think the backstory section was very serious' and that 'How can I trust someone with a position like Vort if I don't know they'll be serious'. My opinion now is that she should be denied due to a reaction like this.

Wow, you need to understand that this is an application optimisum and kindness to others isn't a requirement I believe players should be able to take critism and yes I wrote all of that to try to get an awnser. You don't seem to understand the concept of what the app requires and/or doesn't say in the app it requires trust. But i'm a dickhead yes I understand that everyone can agree with you even in this other community i'm in. How can you trust someone like this I want you to tell me I haven't been roleplaying for so many years in the half life 2. I have the worst experience in OTA, Vortiguants I have some because i've done it sometimes, just because of the way I act outside RP isn't a really good reason to -rep someone. I've been all around servers fall, rise and die and never have I met someone like you... someone who is against me because if what I say to you, do you feel targeted or some form? I wrote paragraphs to you explaining what is a requirement and what isn't and if trust is one of them then you might aswell deny everyone. Trust is a hard thing to earn and a easy thing to lose, I should be putting my time and efforts to botain your trust because if you can't trust all well. and to fix up the pms this is what I said this isn't a copy and paste I see. I was simply stating that just because you have a negative view on me doesn't mean you can -rep from ooc experiences. Call me what you will but you don't see me -reping your app I don't even know you all I know is that you're about to say "childish behavior." tell me does a child ask for an opinion on the situation and try to fix his stuff up? no he has a anger outburst. In a synopsis I was just asking what I needed to be fixed and how personal oof experiences shouldn't be a requirement. You've done and said questionable thing and most of them is just pure malarkey. I'm done explaining. http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1083987324  

[i][b]Neutral[/b][/i] for now. Obviously there is an OOC issue that may or may not be resolved at the moment, but I won't get involved in that here. Both the RP lines and backstory are a bit shoddy, and answer regarding knowledge of Vortessence was a bit lacking. 

Thank you, I will fix that I noticed again how short I wrote it, I will add additional details to this so that it won't be short. I've also edited the back story added it to more of his personality based. +Longer Back story +Added what limits and theories to the Vortessence Also can you elaborate on "shoddy" to the Roleplay lines?

I'm not going to give what I'd have to say about the whole application but I will give my thoughts. When it comes to seeing you online, you tend to be pretty active and whenever I end up RPing with you, you do a great job. If the question is whether or not you can RP well enough to be a vortigaunt, I'd probably say [color=#27ae60][b]+Support[/b][/color]. The application itself can be a little bit tricky to follow at times but I really appreciate you taking the time to update it with some new information. I think you've done a fairly good job, and so it's a light [color=#27ae60][b]+Support[/b][/color] there as well. Given the OOC issue, I don't think it is my place to comment on, and so those who are involved can hopefully work that out. It is a fairly major thing though so it's not ideal that it's happened. I'm just saying what I've seen from you in my own experience.

Willing to [color=#27ae60][i][b]+Support[/b][/i][/color] this. Yes, there are some minor flaws but the knowledge is acceptable. We will see if you are given the chance to obtain the whitelist, if you shall keep it.